Here are some of the hands I played the other day. Looking for some analysys. Good play? Bad play? Where could I have played better? Any and all comentary appreciated even if you are telling me I am nuts.Rick.Getting Hand History Information...----------------------------------------------------------------Hand #4061905-3731 at Dunbar (No Limit Hold'em)Powered by UltimateBetStarted at 22/Jan/05 13:48:24 rivagirl is at seat 0 with $.46. mista2kool712 is at seat 1 with $.95. ainarm is at seat 2 with $2.07. llen is at seat 3 with $2.98. Seven_Tw0 is at seat 4 with $.40. achap is at seat 5 with $2.06. llamaman is at seat 6 with $.86. MMiikkee is at seat 7 with $4.08. Vampette is at seat 8 with $1.49. novus is at seat 9 with $4.09. The button is at seat 8. novus posts the small blind of $.01. rivagirl posts the big blind of $.02. rivagirl: -- -- mista2kool712: -- -- ainarm: Jd Qd llen: -- -- Seven_Tw0: -- -- achap: -- -- llamaman: -- -- MMiikkee: -- -- Vampette: -- -- novus: -- --Pre-flop: mista2kool712 calls. ainarm calls. llen folds. Seven_Tw0 calls. achap folds. llamaman folds. MMiikkee folds. Vampette calls. novus calls. rivagirl checks. Flop (board: Tc Ks 6c): novus checks. rivagirl checks. mista2kool712 bets $.12. ainarm calls. Seven_Tw0 folds. Vampette folds. novus folds. rivagirl folds. Turn (board: Tc Ks 6c 8c): mista2kool712 checks. ainarm checks. River (board: Tc Ks 6c 8c 5s): mista2kool712 checks. ainarm checks. Showdown: mista2kool712 shows Ad Th. mista2kool712 has Ad Th Tc Ks 8c: a pair of tens. ainarm mucks cards. (ainarm has Jd Qd.) Hand #4061905-3731 Summary: No rake is taken for this hand. mista2kool712 wins $.36 with a pair of tens.----------------------------------------------------------------Getting Hand History Information...----------------------------------------------------------------Hand #4061905-3733 at Dunbar (No Limit Hold'em)Powered by UltimateBetStarted at 22/Jan/05 13:50:49 rivagirl is at seat 0 with $.42. mista2kool712 is at seat 1 with $1.15. ainarm is at seat 2 with $1.93. llen is at seat 3 with $3.12. Seven_Tw0 is at seat 4 with $.34. achap is at seat 5 with $2.06. llamaman is at seat 6 with $.82. MMiikkee is at seat 7 with $4.08. Vampette is at seat 8 with $1.45. novus is at seat 9 with $4.07. The button is at seat 0. mista2kool712 posts the small blind of $.01. ainarm posts the big blind of $.02. rivagirl: -- -- mista2kool712: -- -- ainarm: As Ah llen: -- -- Seven_Tw0: -- -- achap: -- -- llamaman: -- -- MMiikkee: -- -- Vampette: -- -- novus: -- --Pre-flop: llen calls. Seven_Tw0 folds. achap folds. llamaman folds. MMiikkee raises to $.04. Vampette folds. novus calls. rivagirl folds. mista2kool712 folds. ainarm re-raises to $.06. llen calls. MMiikkee calls. novus calls. Flop (board: Qh 4d 5h): ainarm bets $.25. llen calls. MMiikkee folds. novus folds. Turn (board: Qh 4d 5h Ks): ainarm checks. llen bets $.02. ainarm raises to $.04. llen calls. River (board: Qh 4d 5h Ks 9h): ainarm checks. llen checks. Showdown: ainarm shows As Ah. ainarm has As Ah Qh Ks 9h: a pair of aces. llen shows 5d 5s. llen has 5d 5s Qh 5h Ks: three fives. Hand #4061905-3733 Summary: No rake is taken for this hand. llen wins $.83 with three fives.----------------------------------------------------------------Getting Hand History Information...----------------------------------------------------------------Hand #4061905-3742 at Dunbar (No Limit Hold'em)Powered by UltimateBetStarted at 22/Jan/05 14:01:25 rivagirl is at seat 0 with $.56. mista2kool712 is at seat 1 with $.54. ainarm is at seat 2 with $2.30. axtellcw is at seat 3 with $.98. Seven_Tw0 is at seat 4 with $.24. achap is at seat 5 with $3.33. llamaman is at seat 6 with $.52. MMiikkee is at seat 7 with $4.06. Vampette is at seat 8 with $.39. piesnake is at seat 9 with $1. The button is at seat 0. mista2kool712 posts the small blind of $.01. ainarm posts the big blind of $.02. piesnake posts out of turn for $.02. rivagirl: -- -- mista2kool712: -- -- ainarm: 8h Th axtellcw: -- -- Seven_Tw0: -- -- achap: -- -- llamaman: -- -- MMiikkee: -- -- Vampette: -- -- piesnake: -- --Pre-flop: axtellcw folds. Seven_Tw0 calls. achap calls. llamaman folds. MMiikkee folds. Vampette calls. piesnake checks. rivagirl folds. mista2kool712 folds. ainarm checks. Flop (board: Qs Jc Td): ainarm checks. Seven_Tw0 checks. achap bets $.02. Vampette folds. piesnake calls. ainarm calls. Seven_Tw0 folds. Turn (board: Qs Jc Td 6s): ainarm checks. achap bets $.02. piesnake calls. ainarm calls. River (board: Qs Jc Td 6s Ah): ainarm checks. achap bets $.23. piesnake folds. ainarm folds. achap is returned $.23 (uncalled). Hand #4061905-3742 Summary: No rake is taken for this hand. achap wins $.23.----------------------------------------------------------------Hand #4061905-3744 at Dunbar (No Limit Hold'em)Powered by UltimateBetStarted at 22/Jan/05 14:03:55 rivagirl is at seat 0 with $.56. mista2kool712 is at seat 1 with $.59. ainarm is at seat 2 with $2.22. axtellcw is at seat 3 with $.96. Seven_Tw0 is at seat 4 with $.52. achap is at seat 5 with $3.50. MMiikkee is at seat 7 with $4.06. Vampette is at seat 8 with $.35. piesnake is at seat 9 with $.94. The button is at seat 2. axtellcw posts the small blind of $.01. Seven_Tw0 posts the big blind of $.02. rivagirl: -- -- mista2kool712: -- -- ainarm: Qc Ks axtellcw: -- -- Seven_Tw0: -- -- achap: -- -- MMiikkee: -- -- Vampette: -- -- piesnake: -- --Pre-flop: achap calls. MMiikkee raises to $.04. Vampette calls. piesnake calls. rivagirl folds. mista2kool712 calls. ainarm calls. axtellcw calls. Seven_Tw0 calls. achap calls. Flop (board: 8d 3d 9s): axtellcw bets $.02. Seven_Tw0 calls. achap calls. MMiikkee calls. Vampette calls. piesnake calls. mista2kool712 folds. ainarm folds. Turn (board: 8d 3d 9s 3h): axtellcw checks. Seven_Tw0 checks. achap checks. MMiikkee bets $.12. Vampette folds. piesnake folds. axtellcw raises to $.24. Seven_Tw0 folds. achap folds. MMiikkee folds. axtellcw is returned $.12 (uncalled). Hand #4061905-3744 Summary: No rake is taken for this hand. axtellcw wins $.68.----------------------------------------------------------------Getting Hand History Information...----------------------------------------------------------------Hand #4061905-3751 at Dunbar (No Limit Hold'em)Powered by UltimateBetStarted at 22/Jan/05 14:12:24 rivagirl is at seat 0 with $.47. mista2kool712 is at seat 1 with $.51. ainarm is at seat 2 with $2.52. axtellcw is at seat 3 with $1.02. Seven_Tw0 is at seat 4 with $1.36. achap is at seat 5 with $3.18. Corn Grinder is at seat 6 with $.36. MMiikkee is at seat 7 with $3.84. Vampette is at seat 8 with $.25. piesnake is at seat 9 with $.64. The button is at seat 0. mista2kool712 posts the small blind of $.01. ainarm posts the big blind of $.02. rivagirl: -- -- mista2kool712: -- -- ainarm: Kd 8h axtellcw: -- -- Seven_Tw0: -- -- achap: -- -- Corn Grinder: -- -- MMiikkee: -- -- Vampette: -- -- piesnake: -- --Pre-flop: axtellcw calls. Seven_Tw0 calls. achap folds. Corn Grinder folds. MMiikkee folds. Vampette folds. piesnake folds. rivagirl calls. mista2kool712 folds. ainarm checks. Flop (board: 7s 7d As): ainarm checks. axtellcw bets $.09. Seven_Tw0 folds. rivagirl folds. ainarm folds. axtellcw is returned $.09 (uncalled). Hand #4061905-3751 Summary: No rake is taken for this hand. axtellcw wins $.09.----------------------------------------------------------------
critic my play please
Started by ainarm, Jan 24 2005 09:51 AM
5 replies to this topic
#1
Posted 24 January 2005 - 09:51 AM
#2
Posted 25 January 2005 - 05:51 AM
Wow, I'm sorry but that is way too many hands for me to go through all of them and discuss your play. Perhaps you might want to pick a hand or two that you were particularly confused on, or that you weren't sure you made the right move.
Jason
#3
Posted 25 January 2005 - 08:41 AM
Ok down to 5 hands that I am not sure about. One that I am pretty sure was just crappy play but the others not sure about.Thanks.
#4
Posted 25 January 2005 - 09:15 AM
Hand 1: Mista2kool overbets the pot, and you call with an open-ended straight draw. You're not getting the right pot odds to make this call. You need better than 2:1 to even think about calling. Hand 2: Not too sure. I think your pre-flop bet is a bit weak, and your post-flop bet is a bit strong considering you missed the flop entirely. When he calls your quarter, you have to be a bit worried.Hand 3: Not bad. Without calculating the pot odds, I'd guess the call was correct on the flop, and close on the turn. Your odds with 6 outs (2 tens, and 4 nines) was somewhere around 3.5:1 and 7:1 on the flop and turn respectively.Hand 4: No hand, no draw after the flop. The fold is correct. I would maybe have re-raised pre-flop though. You had position and decent cards. With a pre-flop raise, you MIGHT have been able to buy the pot on the flop.Hand 5: No hand, no draw. Good fold.I'm no pro, so if I've made errors, I'd love to be corrected. Rog
#5
Posted 25 January 2005 - 12:53 PM
mista2kool712 shows Ad Th. mista2kool712 has Ad Th Tc Ks 8c: a pair of tens. ainarm mucks cards. (ainarm has Jd Qd.) I wouldn't have called from such an early position with that hand, its not strong enough. Nothing wrong with your play after that though.Pre-flop: llen calls. Seven_Tw0 folds. achap folds. llamaman folds. MMiikkee raises to $.04. Vampette folds. novus calls. rivagirl folds. mista2kool712 folds. ainarm re-raises to $.06. llen calls. MMiikkee calls. novus calls.I think you have to re-raise more than just 1BB. I'd raise another .06-.10 at this point. Flop (board: Qh 4d 5h): ainarm bets $.25. llen calls. MMiikkee folds. novus folds.This isn't a bad bet at this point, its about pot size. You might want to have bet a little more to really make people think about that flush draw, but that's fine. Turn (board: Qh 4d 5h Ks): ainarm checks. llen bets $.02. ainarm raises to $.04. llen calls. You definitely have to raise more than that. You've got a very good hand, and both the bet and your raise are very small compared to the pot.River (board: Qh 4d 5h Ks 9h): ainarm checks. llen checks. Not a bad play slowing down there, it certainly seemed he was chasing the flush. Showdown: ainarm shows As Ah. ainarm has As Ah Qh Ks 9h: a pair of aces. llen shows 5d 5s. llen has 5d 5s Qh 5h Ks: three fives.Unlucky that he hit a set there. He may very well fold if you raise more before the flop (although at these micro-limits I doubt it, people rarely fold pocket pairs but raising more is still the correct play). Basically he was drawing to two outs and he happened to hit one.Flop (board: Qs Jc Td): ainarm checks. Seven_Tw0 checks. achap bets $.02. Vampette folds. piesnake calls. ainarm calls. Seven_Tw0 folds. Nothing wrong before the flop, you got to see it cheaply with your T-8 of hearts. Just fold to the bet here though ... you've got bottom pair, a small kicker, and its a coordinated board. On top of that, you don't even have a backdoor flush draw. Think about it, what are you hoping to come on the turn or river? Certainly not a 9, because then you almost certainly will be beat by a higher straight. Pretty much you're hoping to hit another 10, and that could easily be beat by a straight even if you do hit one of those 2 10's remaining (if you aren't drawing dead already).Turn (board: Qs Jc Td 6s): ainarm checks. achap bets $.02. piesnake calls. ainarm calls. Fold. Same reasons as I mentioned on the flop bet.River (board: Qs Jc Td 6s Ah): ainarm checks. achap bets $.23. piesnake folds. ainarm folds. achap is returned $.23 (uncalled). Shoulda done that earlier
rivagirl: -- -- mista2kool712: -- -- ainarm: Qc Ks axtellcw: -- -- Seven_Tw0: -- -- achap: -- -- MMiikkee: -- -- Vampette: -- -- piesnake: -- --Pre-flop: achap calls. MMiikkee raises to $.04. Vampette calls. piesnake calls. rivagirl folds. mista2kool712 calls. ainarm calls. axtellcw calls. Seven_Tw0 calls. achap calls. Fold here after the raise. KQo is only a decent hand in an unraised pot. Way too often you will be dominated or behind.[/b]Flop (board: 8d 3d 9s): axtellcw bets $.02. Seven_Tw0 calls. achap calls. MMiikkee calls. Vampette calls. piesnake calls. mista2kool712 folds. ainarm folds. [/b]Good fold.Pre-flop: axtellcw calls. Seven_Tw0 calls. achap folds. Corn Grinder folds. MMiikkee folds. Vampette folds. piesnake folds. rivagirl calls. mista2kool712 folds. ainarm checks. Nothing wrong with seeing the flop from the BB with K8o.Flop (board: 7s 7d As): ainarm checks. axtellcw bets $.09. Seven_Tw0 folds. rivagirl folds. ainarm folds. axtellcw is returned $.09 (uncalled). Yep, no reason to stay in now.
Jason
#6
Posted 26 January 2005 - 01:57 AM
I think everyone is in agreement that you should have reraised much more (to around .12) with the Aces. Also, you should have folded the 810 on the flop. Generally a pair and a straight draw is nice, but not here, even though it is the minimum bet. Your str8 draw is almost certainly counterfeit because it will give someone a better straight if they hold a king. Likewise, an 8 may or may not give you the best hand, as someone could already have two pair, or it could make someone a str8. If you have A10 this is a different story, as you dont have to worry about making the ass end of a straight, and you have a couple more outs to work with.
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