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An Inside Peek At The Award Winning Poker Themed Screenplay 天egas Knights"


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#81 The Ocho

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Posted 21 August 2014 - 03:32 PM

Glad you did Delaware. Better for liability reasons as well. Once we strip the profits, we file BK. Rinse repeat.

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Drinking alone makes being alone more awesome.

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Posted 21 August 2014 - 06:59 PM

McG is inspired.
there were no special effects, no special effects.

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Posted 21 August 2014 - 07:00 PM

As a choice, I mean.
there were no special effects, no special effects.

#84 frautotenkinder

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Posted 21 August 2014 - 07:29 PM

View PostIphonenkinder, on 21 August 2014 - 06:17 AM, said:

I think the female character should be wearing a backlit light colored baby doll nightgown in the first sequence.

The church sequence, she should be showing a little cleavage in church, because she's a whoring whore who whores. (Unless you address this in ACT 2?)

View PostThe Ocho, on 21 August 2014 - 01:51 PM, said:

Man, this is getting a little frustrating. We have removed and re-written that whole opening.

View PostEssay21, on 21 August 2014 - 02:14 PM, said:

Unfortunately Vegas Knights is no longer on this project. Our legal team has removed him from all documents and spun off into a new corporation known as OchoAces, inc. it's based in Delaware for tax purposes.

Check the time stamp of my post--if your new property features a whoring whore who whores, you will hear from my thread attorney.

View PostJubilantLankyLad, on 21 August 2014 - 06:59 PM, said:

McG is inspired.

If McG isn't available, like he has a shingles flare up and he simply cannot commit to this project, I suggest we go a completely different direction with Chris Columbus.
The above is my best decision in a while.

#85 frautotenkinder

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Posted 21 August 2014 - 08:13 PM

View Postfrautotenkinder, on 21 August 2014 - 07:29 PM, said:

Check the time stamp of my post--if your new property features a whoring whore who whores, you will hear from my thread attorney.

Nevermind, I'm not going to wait to read your new property. I'm going to be proactive about protecting my narrative voice.

Essay, I'm female, and I like you as a friend. Now, I want you to act in a way that is self-defeating and inexplicable. Go file an injunction on yourself.
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Posted 22 August 2014 - 05:22 AM

in re SexyFrau, Inc. vs. OchoAces, Inc.

WHEREAS, SexyFrau alleges intellectual property theft and unwanted leering.

WHEREAS, SexyFrau alleges to like Essay as a friend only.

WHEREAS, SexyFrau alleges the whoring nature of the character currently named "Whoring Whore" was its idea and its idea alone.

WHEREAS, SexyFrau alleges that OchoAces, Inc. did knowingly and willingly violate the Mann Act on the night of August 21, 2014.

WHEREAS, SexyFrau seeks damages in the amount of $11 Bazzallion Dollars.

WHEREAS, SexyFrau seeks full copyright and all intellectual property rights to the script now known as "Hero Fvcks Whores for 90 Minutes and Also Gambles Some."

Duly brought by Essay, a licensed attorney and known sexual pervert, this day, the 22nd of August, the year of our Lord, 2014.
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Posted 22 August 2014 - 07:06 AM

Thank you!
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Posted 22 August 2014 - 09:01 AM

This thread has really turned into something special.
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#89 The Ocho

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Posted 22 August 2014 - 09:04 AM

So looks like we are changing the Character to SluttyMcSlutt. Noted.

David, I think we could use a fresh set of eyes here. Gerry has offered nothing since the changes have come down from up top. What say you?

View PostTheraflu, on 24 October 2014 - 05:05 PM, said:

Drinking alone makes being alone more awesome.

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Posted 22 August 2014 - 09:18 AM

View PostThe Ocho, on 22 August 2014 - 09:04 AM, said:

So looks like we are changing the Character to SluttyMcSlutt. Noted.

David, I think we could use a fresh set of eyes here. Gerry has offered nothing since the changes have come down from up top. What say you?

I will think it over and offer some notes later, but I think there is a really healthy and productive exchange of ideas going on here. I especially like all friend zone lawsuit elements.

Have we considered flipping the promiscuity thing? Like, maybe his wife was a virgin when they married, and dislikes sex and is into purity, and he leaves her because the shame she still feels over sexuality has made it impossible to have any real intimacy. He could leave her for a dealer who turns tricks on the side, and thus is warm and loving, i.e. competent in bed.
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Posted 22 August 2014 - 09:20 AM

Can that train of thought end in lasting polygamy?

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Posted 22 August 2014 - 09:28 AM

View PostThe Ocho, on 22 August 2014 - 09:20 AM, said:

Can that train of thought end in lasting polygamy?

It gets there and keeps going. The gimp mask will make a nice Pulp Fiction reference to bring in the film lovers, too.
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Posted 10 September 2014 - 08:43 AM

New plan, turn it into a sequel to Willy Wonka's Chocolate Factory, set about 30 years after the original ended....Charlie ended up selling the factory and buying a casino. Gene Wilder reprises his role of Willy Wonka of course, but now he's evil and tries to stack the deck against our hero whenever possible. The oompa loompa's are now black jack and craps dealers and sing morality songs about the pit falls of gambling. the climactic sequence is Charlie versus our hero in a heads up hold em match with control of the casino on the line.




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